Family Photography Photo Critique
"Come on out!"
by Laura Champ
Category: Family Photography
Exposure time: 1/100 ,
Description: I like the expression on my grandsons face when he looked at his younger brother. I see all >
I like the expression on my grandsons face when he looked at his younger brother. I was conveying the friendship between brothers, eve nat a young age.
Subject of photo
Composition & Perspective
Use of camera, exposure & speed
Color & Lighting
Depth of field
Kids are always great subjects.
The composition is a little static for the emotion you are trying to convey.
In your description you are talking about the expression on the boy facing yet he is out of focus.
You have the tools to get the shot.
I l ike the lighting and the direction that it is coming from
The facing subject should be the one in focus.
I do still like the image.
How to improve your photo
Try and leave more space around an image like this and place the subjects in a lower corner area, in this case the right side to draw your attention to the facing subject.
It seems the camera was a little tilted making the subjects look as if they are leaning slightly, try and watch the tilt.
Change youe angle of view slightly to show slightly more separation between the subjects.
Get feedback on your photos from Pro Mike Spiegel, CPP, Cr.Photog.