Documentry Photography Photo CritiqueNOTHING MORE TO DOby LAURA MCCRORY Views: 1121
Category: Documentry PhotographyNikon D5000
Lens: Telephoto: 50-200mm
Exposure time: 1/200 ,
F-stop: F2.8
ISO: 200
Flash: None
Tripod: No
Description: The fireman walking away from the "fully involved" fire is like saying "there is noth see all >
The fireman walking away from the "fully involved" fire is like saying "there is nothing more that can be done here."
Photo Critique SummarySubject of photo 9 Composition & Perspective 8 Color & Lighting 9 Depth of field 9 General impression 8 Overall Rating 8.6 GuruShots ProSubject of photo:9 It's not very often you get an opportunity to photograph a fire. This is a very interesting subject. Composition & Perspective:8 I'm glad you decided the point of view is the Firefighter as the "important" object in focus. Great use of depth of field. Color & Lighting:9 The colors are very complimentary and dramatic. It's great to see the green and orange work with the earth tones of the burning building. Depth of field:9 Excellent choice to use shallow depth of field. It brings your eye right to the mystery of the subject matter..the firefighter. General impression:8 Hi Laura:
The only thing that bothers me is I want to see more of the firefighter. What is that white object in his hand? It's ok that we don't see his face but I just want to see a little more of his hand and even one leg with his hose or tools used to put out the fire. How to improve your photo1. Take different perspective shots: above, below, closeup and further away. 2. Add a little more contrast to create more drama! 3. Experiment with collage: take similar images and create a triptych. Get feedback on your photos from Pro Andy Mars | ||