Architectual Photography Photo CritiqueThe Angel in a different lightby Leonard Aschenbrand Views: 1343
Category: Architectual PhotographyNikon D60
Lens: Zoom: Variable focal
Exposure time: 1/400 ,
F-stop: F8
ISO: 1600
Flash: None
Tripod: No
Description: Still trying to get the perfect "staight" inverted photo of the angel.......Think I g see all >
Still trying to get the perfect "staight" inverted photo of the angel.......Think I got the right exposure this time and took photo from the right spot.....Tell me what you think
Photo Critique SummarySubject of photo 10 Composition & Perspective 9 Focus 10 Use of camera, exposure & speed 10 Color & Lighting 10 Depth of field 10 General impression 10 Overall Rating 9.9 GuruShots ProSubject of photo:10 Statues with lots of texture - very nice subject material. Composition & Perspective:9 I like the low perspective - it matches the angel perfectly - and the symmetry of the plinth anchors the subject really nicely.
You've almost nailed the composition as well - I would have liked to see a little separation between the rear wing and the face - not a lot, but just enough to see a little sky behind. Focus:10 Focus looks spot on. Use of camera, exposure & speed:10 I think you've nailed that exposure too, Leonard. Nice detail in the highlights as well as the shadows - well done! Color & Lighting:10 Lighting is very good as well - I can see the detail and texture in the wings and the robe. Looks to be side lighting which works really well with the subject. Depth of field:10 DOF is good - nice and sharp front to back and for this shot, the rear wing tip is just as important as the front one. General impression:10 I really like this image, and the PS manipulation actually adds to feel of the original photo. The red of the sky works nicely with the angel - almost monochromatic in feel. How to improve your photo1. Once you get the angle that you think works best, don't be afraid to step a little right, left, backwards and forwards to adjust the view slightly. Sometimes it makes the image stronger, and other times it doesn't work at all - but by trying different things, you learn regardless of what makes a photo stronger and/or weaker in the process. 2. Seeing this shot, makes me want to attempt it myself in B&W. The original is a little dull in colour - so the PS technique you chose has really set it apart. Give B&W a shot in PS, and see how you can improve further on that original. 3. Leonard, you've done really well with this image - exposure, lighting and composition have all come into play and you've executed your technique beautifully. Well done - this is certainly a favourite for me. Get feedback on your photos from Pro Nanette Reid | ||